The young seagull's fear of flying and reluctance to leave his ledge contribute to the development of the theme of independence and courage in the story. Justify.
(Two Stories about Flying)
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Model Answer
In His First Flight, the young seagull's fear clearly establishes the theme of independence and courage. Despite his wings being longer than his siblings', he was too afraid to fly, dreading the vast expanse of sea below. His family's encouragement, threats, and taunting failed to move him. Only hunger — when he dived desperately for the fish his mother held out — forced him to take the plunge. The moment he spread his wings, fear vanished and he soared freely, showing that courage is achieved by confronting one's fears, and independence is earned through action, not comfort.
Source: His First Flight, Two Stories about Flying, Chapter 3
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Explanation
- The examiner expects you to connect the seagull's fear to the theme — don't just retell the story.
- Key points to hit: (1) the seagull's reluctance/fear, (2) the family's role (threats + encouragement), (3) the trigger (hunger/mother's fish), (4) the moment of overcoming fear = theme of courage and independence.
- Avoid padding. 3 marks = roughly 3 distinct, well-linked points.
- End with a thematic statement — examiners reward students who explicitly name the theme.